This is a good start for the series... But...
The frame rate was very smooth; speed didn't bother me; that part where she said her father was Satan was somewhat funny, but if you've had added her voice and let her mouth be able to move to what she was saying would probably get it to be more humorous, that part where she killed that spider was a little odd, I dislike being around spiders too, but I don’t smash or incinerate them thoroughly, LoL, dark background music would be a good thing, it would be nicer is she was a little more animated, and I wish you the best of luck on the rest of the series.